On a wednesday morning we headed down to the beach we were in groups of 3 I was with Cory and Oska. We grabbed our bucket and lined up we headed out for a beach clean up we arrived at the beach and Oska was holding the bucket me and Cory ran out Cory found a beer bottle in the first 3 minutes.
20 minutes later are bucket was fulled and Cory was holding the bucket and I found 3 balloons and Oska found a balloon to. We got back and we sorted out are rubbish into bins then we went back to class.
Hi Reef,
ReplyDeleteHere is a question for you, could you put why you did the beach clean up? Also could you put some full stops in then I think it would be a awesome blog post. Also make your writing a little bigger if you have time so I could find out more about the beach clean up. From Kyla-Rose
Hi Reef,
ReplyDeleteI like the blog post that you published.It reminds me of the amount of rubbish we collected on the beach.Maybe you could add in a few full sops here and there to make it even better.I don't have any questions for you.
Bridie.
Hi Reef, I like your blog because you used all the right punctuation. Next time I think you can make your blog a bit longer. Did you like the beach clean up? Nice job!
ReplyDeleteHi Reef, Its really cool how you guys went to the beach maybe next time you could wright some more and tell us why you did it. From Millie.R
ReplyDeleteKai ora, Reef I really like your blog was it fun picking up rubbish? maybe next you could tell me why you were doing it?
ReplyDeleteTuhinga ka whai mai, Millie